Conquest of Elegance - Forum

Sooo..decided to join a RPG eh? You probably know you can't join without a character.

It's simple, just fill in the list below and I'll check if your character is good enough. When I don't think your character is good enough I'll give you some hints and tips to make it better.

For example:

Name: Amber <--- What is her lastname?
Kind: Vampire <--- Can she stand sunlight? Is she a bloodsucker?

I gave this person a tip as you can see. Details are important.

When I open a RPG, make sure you read information form the Game master (GM). In this case I'm the GM, but everone who starts a RPG can be. Information from the GM can be about this Characterlist. You can find it in the OCC topic. OCC means Out Of Character. You can discuss things about the RPG there.

This is a normal character-list. If you've got something special to say about your character you can put it by Details.

Name: (don't forget the lastname!)
Kind: (human, vampire, werewolf.. etc.) <-- In Real life only human
Age: (maybe your vampire is 100 years old, but looks like a 20-year old)
Hobbies:
Personality: (very stubborn, gets angry very quickly, hates children etc.)
How does he/she look?: (blue eyes, long hair, very tall, short tail etc.)
Likes:
Dislikes:
History:
Family:
Details: (maybe post a picture?, favorite pet, in love with.., often goes to.. etc.)

If something isn't clear to you, pm me
Ben

Name: Dawn, and that probably isn't her real name either, just what she calls herself. So no, not a last name, I didn't forget and I won't add one either :p That's fine, other characters will just call her Dawn
Kind: Vampire, she's just cool like that xD.. nyway srs now: My darling Dawn doesn't like sunlight much. Sunlight won't immediatly kill her, but after a few minutes it's over. No gay-ass garlic or crossmagicness can harm her xD She needs blood to survive, but doesn't have all those supernatural powers like superspeed/strenght, personally, I really detest that >_< overpowered? where can't see! >_< Okay, no special powers
Age: She's a pretty young vampire, around... 1927? that would make her 81 years old. She looks like she's in her mid-twenties though. How long do you think vampires live?depends on when they were created ne? Imo vampires only die when they don't feed or get out in the sun, so a vampire could live for thousends of years right?
Hobbies: Mostly clubbing, she's got to get her food somewhere right? She also seems to enjoy reading a lot, mainly books about the war spike her attention.
Personality: Quite laid back, doesn't worry much. She's got a huge ego and comes of as cocky. She enjoys being a vampire and has no regrets. She's not to worried about killing humans to feed off, she's also quite a smartass. Doesn't like to play with her food to much and straight to the point. She's bored easily and besides reading there's barely anything she's interest in. Sounds like she doesn't care about anything? Does she have a weak point?not really anyhing xept for reading no :p Isn't all of that a weak point already?
How does he/she look?:

No I did not just lamely use this pic for her, Dawn was created quite a while back, I drew this with the intention to create the character. Unfortunatly, I never really did something with her. Long hair, is she tall, is she thick? I know you made this yourself. But what does she normally wear? Or does she go outside like this?I'll be drawing a new picture with everyday wear then :p hate explaining things like that xD she's a little shorter then average height, the rest you can clearly see in the pic I believe :p
Likes: As you can see she quite likes the color pink, she's also a chainsmoker. She only likes pink? Nothing else?eeh, well yeah reading, I already mentioned that :p but remember.. she doesn't care ^^ although she seems the type that likes clubbing ^^ So I'll add that :p
Dislikes: Guys, basicly. She thinks they are gross, end of story. Her only true love betrayed her.. sad lovestory yaddayadda... what a poor poor girl she is >_< (look, I'm annoyed by my own character xD) ^-^ Good, that will match with her personality adn history. Good job
History: Okay, I hope I got my facts straight? She was born in the year 1927 in the city Nagasaki in Japan. When she was 14, war broke out. Mother, Father and a Sister. at her 18th, in 1944 she fell in love with this guy, he lived in Tokyo but was temporary in Nagasaki. He loved her back and she wanted to join him in Tokyo. Parents didn't want her to leave because they were afraid Tokyo would be bombed again but in may 1945 she left anyway, found her man. He appeared to be a vampire though, turned her just because he's an ass and wanted to ruin her life. He dissappeared after that, never to be seen again. Dawn desided to go back home, more upset with him leaving then with being a vampire cuz, to be honest, she kind of enjoyed it. She was planning to return on the 10th of august, but at the 9th the news reached her that the Americans dropped an atomic bomb on Nagasaki, her family was among the dead. She stayed in Tokyo after that, having nowhere else to go. She learned the ways of a vampire quite quick and surrounded herself with a group of friends. This is fantasy, ^-^ let's not care about the facts. Nice story, though! but I love facts xD
Family: Stated above... They were the last remaining of her family, both of her parents didn't have any brothers or sisters. Dawn never produced any kids, so she is assumed to be the last of her bloodline.
Details: Like wut? Does she have a purpose in life? Revenge her family's death? Kill the person she loved? Does she have a job? Does she live in a house or cave or whatever? Lol, she lives in a house with a few friends, appartment in the center of tokyo, a job would be difficult since she can't go outside when the sun shines :p she gets her money from her preys, it's not like she needs much right? Her purpose in life? I think she really wants to write her own novel, but don't tell her I think that, she'd kill me if she knew I found that out ¬¬[/color]


Think I'm done.... XD

I think you've made a nice character! ^-^ Okay, I'm a guy and she hates guys, but that doesn't matter =P. You might think I'm a teacher or something, correct you like that. It's only to improve your character.
Maybe you could take away comments like: When did Tokyo get bombed? That will make it more surveyable, if you know what I mean.

:) You are very quick..! I'll check your character as soon as possible. Maybe I'll put tips here or just pm you. :) It looks nice.

She was already created XD Mostly... I only needed to think up an history, I got inspired by the paper on Japan I am making for school right now :p

Just let me know when you're ready It's sounds interesting, I love Japan..

I'm ready ^^ guess I could start playing now too, only problem, Im the only one ready XD
Let's make the setting for the rpg japan~
(aka: I don't feel like thinking of a reason on why she left Japan xD)

Okay, I'll see if something is missing or if you can improve something. Not everything is ready yet and you are very quick ^-^ I'll look for more RPG-players.


Gizorz, as you can see, I gave you a few tips to improve your character. If you edit your post you may take away my 'red corrections'.

Benjamin are you also joining with the RPG? Or are you just a mod?

I'm joining the RPG of course! I'll post my character ASAP.

(17 December 2008 15:22:06)Benjamin Wrote: [ -> ]Okay, I'll see if something is missing or if you can improve something. Not everything is ready yet and you are very quick ^-^ I'll look for more RPG-players.


Gizorz, as you can see, I gave you a few tips to improve your character. If you edit your post you may take away my 'red corrections'.

I saw ^^ thanks !
I never wrote out a character liket his before so I'm happy with the corrections :p

Imma go change now ^^ you made good suggestions ^^

I'm glad my corrections didn't upset you. Sometimes people go crazy, because I say their character isn't good enough.

I wouldn't put my character up her if I would be offended by it :p
I know you are just helping ^^ and I'm always open for new suggestions :D

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Edited ^^

Okay, everything's clear to me now. You'll just have to wait for other members to join

hokay ^^

Okay, let me think :)
Name: Aya Mizumi
Gender: female
Kind: half human, half witch (no wand!) with power over water, but she doesn't need "real" water for her spells
Age: 15
Hobbies: drawing, she's especially good at landscapes, daydreaming, practising her spells, designing outfits
Personality: quiet and observing, usually thinks before she acts, the "discriber-type" (i.e. surroundings, situations), afraid of lightning, morning-person
Looks: long, black hair, average length, green eyes, white skin. Likes to wear skirts and dresses, a bit lolita-like. Loves to experiment with her nails and often wears the strangest and brightest colours nailpolish.
Likes: (see hobbies), nailpolish, the scent of the air in the morning when it has been raining during the night, orange
Dislikes: lightning, television. She thinks love is a ridiculous thing.
History: Both her parents died when she was seven when their house caught fire due to lightning. This is why she is afraid of it. Her family was witch from her mother's side and human from her father's side. The marriage between witch and human was thought ridiculous and their marriage was doomed from the beginning. This is why Aya thinks love is stupid. She lives with her aunt and uncle and three nephews from her mother's side. Her aunt teaches her magic, who also has the control over water. Aya enjoys learning spells, but she hates it there because she is always left out since she's half human, half witch.
Family: she is an only child and her parents died. Her grandparents from her mother's side are still alive, but she has never met them. They live abroad. Her grandparents from her father's side were really old and both died, and since her father was an only child, there is no family left from his side. She lives with her aunt and uncle and three nephews. Her nephews are really spoiled and always tease her because she's a girl and half human.
Details: (I'll do this later because I've to go now.)